雅思作文求修改意见，只求修到6.5就好。快考试了急求！感谢~~~
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- 2021-04-04 07:45
雅思作文求修改意见，只求修到6.5就好。快考试了急求！感谢~~~
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- 五星知识达人网友：傲气稳了全场
- 2021-04-04 08:42
对于line graph ，一定需要介绍 起点值，转折点的值，终点的值，变化趋势，交点值，以及对不同线段之间进行适当的对比。 描述的时候逻辑结构要尽可能的清晰，可以按照时间顺序，从左到右写，按照数值大小，从大到小进行描述。希望可以帮到你。 我表格题并不擅长，所以没有改写
The graph and table below(一定要删掉的词) give the information about how water has been used all over the world and how water is consumed in two different countries.
==> The line graph illustrates data about water use worldwide while the table gives information about water consumption in two different countries -Brazil and Congo.
Between1900 to 2000 ,the (figure for)global water use for agriculture ,industry and home presented an increasing trend in the picture(graph).Besides ,what we can conclude from the table is that although Brazil’s population and irrigated land are very different from Democratic Republic of Congo ,the consumption of the average water use in Brazil is rather more than (in)Congo.
==> we can see from the line graph that the amount of water used by agriculture, industry and household all appeared a rising trend from 1900 to 2000. Over this decade, the figure for agricultural water consumption was consistently much higher than other two sectors’consumption. In 1990, the number of water used by agriculture was 500 km3. After a slow growth to 1000 Km3 till 1950, the figure for agricultural water use increased dramatically, ending at around 3000 Km3 in 2000. By contrast, in industry and household sector, the number of water used remained stable at nearly 0 from very beginning to 1950, and after that the figure began to rise gradually, ending at 1200 Km3 and 400 Km3 in 2000, respectively. Additionally,over this decade, the water consumption for industry was consistently more than for home, and the gap of water use was widened gradually with time, which became especially obvious after 1905.
The graph and table below(一定要删掉的词) give the information about how water has been used all over the world and how water is consumed in two different countries.
==> The line graph illustrates data about water use worldwide while the table gives information about water consumption in two different countries -Brazil and Congo.
Between1900 to 2000 ,the (figure for)global water use for agriculture ,industry and home presented an increasing trend in the picture(graph).Besides ,what we can conclude from the table is that although Brazil’s population and irrigated land are very different from Democratic Republic of Congo ,the consumption of the average water use in Brazil is rather more than (in)Congo.
==> we can see from the line graph that the amount of water used by agriculture, industry and household all appeared a rising trend from 1900 to 2000. Over this decade, the figure for agricultural water consumption was consistently much higher than other two sectors’consumption. In 1990, the number of water used by agriculture was 500 km3. After a slow growth to 1000 Km3 till 1950, the figure for agricultural water use increased dramatically, ending at around 3000 Km3 in 2000. By contrast, in industry and household sector, the number of water used remained stable at nearly 0 from very beginning to 1950, and after that the figure began to rise gradually, ending at 1200 Km3 and 400 Km3 in 2000, respectively. Additionally,over this decade, the water consumption for industry was consistently more than for home, and the gap of water use was widened gradually with time, which became especially obvious after 1905.
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