There is a beautiful country standing in the east of the world. She has red soil,big mountains,long rivers and hardworking people.she is just like a diamond,shining all the time.And she is my dearest country- China.
I'm so pround of being a Chinese. I'm proud that I've got the becautiful yellow skin,black eyes and blank hair.I love my country.
I have a dream. I want to be a volunteer,to help other people.Because in these I can to get the biggest happinees. I enjoy it. So I will keep working and do my best.
In the future, China will be proud of me!
这是 我写的， 老师让 适当增加 ‘me’的表述
请高手 帮忙修改下。
（这作文 要参加比赛，改的好点儿。）