英语翻译：知识经济的迅猛发展，使互联网成为当今社会的一大主题。当前，网络不仅是一种时尚和潮流的象征

英语翻译：知识经济的迅猛发展，使互联网成为当今社会的一大主题。当前，网络不仅是一种时尚和潮流的象征

1，It is not only a symbolize of the fashion and trend，这句，改成倒装会更高级：not only is it ……
2.Although we begin the computer very late，这句不好，根据你的意思可以修改成Although we didn‘t make a great progress in early years.
3,Depend-->Depending, teenager--->teenagers
4,their philosophy、v alues so many areas. 顿号改逗号，英语没顿号。so many areas改成and so on
5，We need to analysis the immanent cause of the internet’s influence so that we can enhance the management on the web and supervision by public opinion, promote the Internet industry develop in a healthy way for the public,especially the teenagers最后一句有点混乱，不一定非要用上so that 句型，而且especially the teenagers 也略显啰嗦。
the immanent cause of the internet’s influence should be analysised that the management on the web and supervision by public opinion will be enhanced.In all,let us go for it to make a more harmony environment of Internet!
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The rapid development of the knowledge economy made the internet to be a popular topic(这里用topic比较好因为特指是社会类的主题，而用popular却不big等别的词汇是因为这里需要意译，大主题就是流行主题). The Internet is not only a symbol (这里要用名词symbol，symbolize是动词) of the fashion and tide (用tide比较好), but also the embodiment of the technological level even the comprehensive national strength of a country.(country移到后面来通顺些) Although the computer and Internet start in our country a little bit late, (although和but只能用其一不能同时用，所以这里的but去掉) it is swift in action these years.

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