谁能帮忙打一下分数（托福作文）
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谁能帮忙打一下分数（托福作文）
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- 五星知识达人网友：玩家
- 2021-01-30 23:26
personal rating: 3
your essay is fairly organized , with a easy and simply stucture swiftly guiding readers to undertand your "storyline". That's a good thing, keep going! However, the irritating grammar flaws and poorly dispensed examples greatly cripple the fluency and efficacy of your essay.
Here are 3 ways to help you get a higher point:
1, Pay more attention to your potential grammar mistakes. Practicing more and then you will find out that you may make the same mistakes over and over again,e.g. run on sentences, tense errors, etc. Keep your eyes on these mistakes and try to avoid them next time.
2 Think before you write the essay. Making a sketch can also help. Right now you are not successful to demonstrate your points and arguments clearly, and the examples are far too simple to be convicing .Keep in mind: persuade people, don't make fool of them.
3 Revise your transitional paragraph.To say in a blunt way, your transitional sentences make me confused and I have spent several minutes scratching my head wondering what your points are. Do not make your transtional words and expression contradict with your previous statements. There is no certain way to articulate yourself, so if you are not so proficient in making a transition, try something else.
your essay is fairly organized , with a easy and simply stucture swiftly guiding readers to undertand your "storyline". That's a good thing, keep going! However, the irritating grammar flaws and poorly dispensed examples greatly cripple the fluency and efficacy of your essay.
Here are 3 ways to help you get a higher point:
1, Pay more attention to your potential grammar mistakes. Practicing more and then you will find out that you may make the same mistakes over and over again,e.g. run on sentences, tense errors, etc. Keep your eyes on these mistakes and try to avoid them next time.
2 Think before you write the essay. Making a sketch can also help. Right now you are not successful to demonstrate your points and arguments clearly, and the examples are far too simple to be convicing .Keep in mind: persuade people, don't make fool of them.
3 Revise your transitional paragraph.To say in a blunt way, your transitional sentences make me confused and I have spent several minutes scratching my head wondering what your points are. Do not make your transtional words and expression contradict with your previous statements. There is no certain way to articulate yourself, so if you are not so proficient in making a transition, try something else.
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- 1楼网友：夜风逐马
- 2021-01-31 00:27
你可以去小马过河给那里专业的英语老师看看他们有什么建议，给你一个比较靠谱的回答。
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