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高中英语短文改错

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  • 提问者网友:焚苦与心
  • 2021-06-01 01:17

we're sorry that you don't find sports and P.E. a fun. try your best in P.E. every time you participate. try to look at it like a way to learn some skills. we suggest that you will talk to your P.E. teacher but let him or her know how you feel. by sharing your feelings, the teacher can see that you are really trying your best and you care about what was happening in class. he or she may have some suggestions for when to handle your feelings. if you start to feel down on yourself after a P.E. class, trying to remind yourself of all the things you do really good. no one is good at everything. accepting yourself and having a positive attitude can help your through any situation. we hope this will help.

有十处错误。多改可以,少改不行。请大家帮帮忙,本人不胜感激。

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  • 五星知识达人网友:低血压的长颈鹿
  • 2021-06-01 02:56

修改后的:We're sorry that you can't find sports and P.E. a fun. Try your best in P.E. every time you participate in. Try to look at it like a way to learn some skills. we suggest that you (should) talk to your P.E. teacher but let him or her know how you feel. By sharing your feelings, the teacher can see that you are really trying your best and you caring about what was happening in class. he or she may have some suggestion for when to handle your feelings. If you start to feel down on yourself after a P.E. class, try to remind yourself of all the things you do really well. No one is good at everything. Accept yourself and have a positive attitude can help your through any situation. we hope this will help you.

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  • 1楼网友:空山清雨
  • 2021-06-01 03:32

去掉a

like a way改成in a way

you will talk to 去掉will

but 改成 and

know改成knows

was happening 改成happened

suggestions改成suggestion

do改are

through前加 go

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