阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。WiththedevelopmentoftheInternetandth

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a common place in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don’t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can’t see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;2. 然后以约120个词以”网上购物”为主题发表看法,并包括以下要点:(1) 你认为网上购物的最大优点是什么;(2) 描述你或你的朋友或同学网上购物的体验;(3) 你对网上购物有什么建议.1. 可以使用事例或其他论述方法支持你的观点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不能直接引用原文中的句子;2. 标题自拟.

One possible version:
Shopping on the Internet
The passage talks about the advantages and disadvantages of shopping on the Internet. Though it has some weaknesses, it is becoming more and more popular.
I think the strongest point of shopping on the Internet is the convenience. We don’t have to search from shops to shops to look for the things we want, which saves a lot of time and energy. Some of my friends enjoy it very much and often buy some books, CDs and clothes on the Internet. I haven’t done much shopping on the Internet. The only thing I have bought on the Internet is a beautiful backpack, which I really like and it cost me 25 yuan.
However, we must be careful not to be cheated when shopping on the Internet. First, we should read the ads very carefully. Secondly, don’t believe everything they say in the advertisements and try to compare the prices more. What’s more important, we’d better choose those famous companies.



试题分析：本文的关键在于审题，首先要描述文章的要点，即网络购物的优势和劣势。以及写作网络购物的越来越受欢迎的趋势。实际上本文属于议论文，要阐述你所认为的网络购物的最大的优势—便利，便宜。同时也要客观地描述网络购物的劣势—安全性不高。再细致地描述你自己的一次网购的体验，同时提出自己的网络购物的建议要仔细甄别。
点评：审题时一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

答案：as改成with 解释：后面是名词短语the development of the internet，而不是一个状语从句。 所以用介词with，而不用连词as，虽然它们都有“随着...”的意思。

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