6年级英语作文【我的未来】旁带中文

6年级英语作文【我的未来】旁带中文~`·~5分钟，，急用，，，，50字左右··~~

I'm not sure about the future. Because I am not really sure what I'll be doing in the future. And I think the future is far away from me. I'm not really sure if I really have a chance in the future.

I guess that I will be working and may be a interpreter or a pilot. I like English. I think English is very useful and it is very difficult and exciting. I'm interested in it. Perhaps it is a good or interesting career for me. I like travelling too. I want to travel around the world.

But I'm too busy enjoying my life now. In the weekdays, I have many subjects to learn.And in the weekends, I have many friends with me. Sometimes we go shopping and sometimes we do many different things. I have a good family and I must look after my parents because I have grown up.I think it is enough for me.

So I don't worry about the future.I'm really sure I will have a good and nice future if I work hard at my study.

我不知道未来。因为我的确不知道我会在今后的工作。我认为，未来是远离了我。我不太知道，如果我真的有一个未来的机会。
我想我会的工作，可能是翻译或试点。我喜欢英语。我觉得英语是非常有用的，这是非常困难的，令人振奋。我很感兴趣。也许对我来说是好的或有趣的职业生涯。我喜欢旅行了。我想周游世界。
但是我太忙了，我现在的生活享受。在平日，我有很多科目学习.并且在周末，我与我的许多朋友。有时我们去逛街，有时我们做很多不同的事情。我有一个良好的家庭，我必须照顾我的父母，因为我长大.我认为是足够了。
因此，我不担心未来.我是真的相信，我将有一个良好和美好的未来，如果我工作，我努力学习。

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第一句话有些问题，用surprise有些不妥，和后文没有什么关系。你可以写成“i was very happy yesterday”或者“yesterday was a fine day”.“there were lots and lots of people there”这句话有问题应改为there were lots of people there. "the people was sang,danced and played chess there."people前不加"the" 而且这句话语法有问题，应该改为people sang danced and played chess.“be+doing”是现在进行时不适合用在这里，因为整篇文章用的都是过去时，文章时态要统一 “the food was chinese food”这个我也不确定对不对，但觉得怪怪的，可以换一种方式来讲“we ate chinese food.” “they were very delicious”这句话不对，因为cinese food是不可数名词，一般看作单数所以应改成“it was very delicious.” "then we saw chinese dancing in there."这句也有问题。“there"是副词，副词前不加定冠词“the” “ i want learn this dancing”这句时态错了，应该是“wanted”还有应该是“i wanted to learn this dancing”这里有一个动词不定式“want to do something” “it's a very prefect day!”时态错误！应是“it was a very prefect day！” 上面的都是我自己改的，应该都对，你自己仔细再看一下，有好多东西可能小学还没有教过，所以你错得比较多，不过没有关系的，以后在初中里都会讲的。你一定要再接再厉哦！谢谢~~~

My future when I was young,I dreamed of having a pair of wings.Because I want to fly in the clear sky.……

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