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I am proud I’m a Chinese

I love my motherland,China.It doesn’t need any reasons.Because I am a Chines.China is an ancient country with five thousand years of civilization.It is one of the largest countries in the world. There are rich natural resources in our country.We can enjoy beautiful scenery all over our country.

The 60^th National Day is gone.From 1949 to 2009,China goes through a great and unordinary time.We have overcome the difficulties and problems one by one.We created our country with our own hands,going through the Three-year Hard Period from 1959-1961 and Ten-year Culture Revolution……Within 60 years changes,China become more stronger and more powerful,high builds appeared,many families have cars,most people can watch TV or use computers……I believe China can be more beautiful and more powerful in the world.

I am proud of living such a country,China.

I am proud I’m a Chinese.

love my motherland,China without any reasons. China is an ancient country with five thousand years of
civilization.It is one of the largest countries in the world. There are
rich natural resources in our country, and we can enjoy beautiful scenery
all over this land.

The 60^th National Day just passed.From 1949 to 2009,China went through a great and unordinary
time.We had overcome the difficulties and problems one by one.We
created our country with our own hands,going through the Three-year
Hard Period from 1959-1961 and Ten-year Culture Revolution……Within the 60
years,China became much stronger and powerful,high buildings
appeared,many families have cars,most people can watch TV or use
computers……I believe China can be more beautiful and powerful in
the future.

I am proud of living such a country,China.

I am proud I’m a Chinese.

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