求英语高手帮我修改下这篇英语作文！

This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a notice according to the information given in Chinese below.
时间：本月10日早晨8点
地点：图书馆前
事由：国庆庆祝活动
相关人员：全体学生
具体： 1、校长简要介绍安排
2、学生参观博物馆，并在中心广场看演出
3、10:30举行篮球比赛

Notice All students are requested to assemble before library at 8 o’clock on 10th this month to participate in the celebration of National Day. The detail is as follow: 1. President introduces briefly the celebration plan. 2. Students are going to visit the museum, and enjoy the performance in the Center Square. 3. A basketball match will be held at 10:30 Students are requested to be on time and behave well. Student Union

Notice

To participate in the celebration of National Day, all students are requested to assemble at the front of the library at 8 am on 10th this month. The detail is as follow:

1. President give brief introduction to the celebration plan.

2. Students are going to visit the museum, and watch the show at the Center Square.

3. A basketball match will be held at 10:30.

All students should be on time and give a good performance.

Student Union

in front of the library这个是方位上常用的

in 10th

celebration's

写的很好呀，牛呵呵

只是上述觉得可以商讨一下

All students 改为All the students

before改为in front of

library 改为the library

The detail is 改为The details are

introduces 改为will introduce

plan改为arrangement

in 改为at

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