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帮忙看一下这段英语短文

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解决时间 2021-04-22 08:24
  • 提问者网友:玫瑰园
  • 2021-04-21 07:29

请加一些比喻句然后帮忙修改一下语法..非常感谢!

Below the melon-colored sunset, the shine of lights quietly fell upon the plane. Look ahead, you see the groaning hawks flying across the orange cottons. This is a busting but most beautiful airport in the world. Kansai Airport looks like awake baby looking up curiously toward the sunset. Warm comfort spring winds gently brushes through my hair. The glass multi-colored buildings not far enhance the mystery of the port. The signal light sparkles around the building telling the planes in a right direction. Everything here seems so gentle and undisturbed. The fresh smell of paint gives off the brand new feeling, like this place is just builds up a second ago. Beneath here, is the darkest ocean spot, this airport is in the middle of the tremendous king of the sea. Behind me, is a enormous bridge that connected to the city. The sound of busies of citizens talking covers that lighten place. The sky is getting darker and darker, but this place will never be gloomy. With cities hasty, with towns calm, this made a perfect place for you to stay or to leave.

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  • 五星知识达人网友:天凉才是好个秋
  • 2021-04-21 08:57
挺好的啊,写得很好~~不错啊,就是最后一句应该是stay or leave~~
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  • 1楼网友:冷風如刀
  • 2021-04-21 09:44
第7行的builds应该用过去时---built
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