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帮我改错(别人的英语作文)

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  • 提问者网友:暮烟疏雨之际
  • 2021-04-27 11:37

Everyone wishes to be successful in life .while dicussing this we must bear in mind the principles . such as ;diligence.devotion and perseverance .

I think the first key factor to the success is diligence.diligence can helf us remove ignorance and overcome diffculties diligence can make a foolwise and a poor man rich .if I waste time now .my future life will be failure .

Devotion which means the concertration of our mind and effort in doing things is another key to success whatever jop I am doing I should love it and do it whole heartedly only when we set our minds on the jop can we do it well

Furthermore.perserverance or a strong will is also necessary in order to make success a certainly if we study or work day after day there is nothing that can not be achieved without a stong will on other hand .we likely to give up when we meet some difficulties in short a stong will urge a person to perfom wonderful

to conclude just as the famous English saying goes No pains .no gains

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  • 五星知识达人网友:举杯邀酒敬孤独
  • 2021-04-27 12:08

1,to successful ,wish to do sth. to be successful 是不定式的被动形式不需要。 在网上很不好讲清楚第一段结构都有问题。整篇文章的结构不对,还是找老师当面给你讲的好。

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