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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following p

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  • 提问者网友:暗中人
  • 2021-01-03 02:56
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. In the picture, we can see a giraffe making great efforts to reach for the leaves from a tall tree, sweating a lot. No matter how hard it tries, it still cannot get any leaf. Around the giraffe, there are some small trees which are much easier for it to approach.
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  • 五星知识达人网友:白昼之月
  • 2021-01-03 03:53
(答案→)In the picture, we can see a giraffe making great efforts to reach for the leaves from a tall tree, sweating a lot. No matter how hard it tries, it still cannot get any leaf. Around the giraffe, there are some small trees which are much easier for it to approach. 解析:这是一篇开放式作文,也是看图作文,认真读图,可知图画反映了我们在行动前要分析形势的问题,写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】No matter how hard it tries, it still cannot get any leaf. 这句话用的是让步状语从句,Around the giraffe, there are some small trees which are much easier for it to approach. 这句话用的是定语从句, The picture sends us the message that we should analyze the situation before taking action. 这句话用的是同位语从句,Apparently, the short-sighted giraffe concentrates all its attention on the tall tree, neglecting other short trees around it, which can be reached easily. 这句话有定语从句和现在分词做状语, What we should do is when we fail after making attempts, we need to analyze the situation around and consider other ways to solve the problem. 这句话用了what引导的主语从句。
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  • 2021-01-03 04:55
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