英语语法问题,帮忙看看这篇作文有没有问题（日记）

英语语法问题,帮忙看看这篇作文有没有问题（日记）
Today many activities,so we all got up early
Today we are going to go in the first place is twenty-second session of Tsingtao brewstery Festival Entertainment District,we first arrived at old address,now there is a parking lot,then by bus because I went past,the Dalian,so there are recreational facilities I have played,only playing a rocket bungee jumping,too stimulation.

Today(加we had) many activities, so we all got up early
(Today we are going to go in the first place is 这句要重新整理: The first place we were going today was the) twenty-second session of Tsingtao brewstery Festival Entertainment District, we first arrived at (加 the) old address, now there is a parking lot, then by bus because ( I 不是 we 吗?) went past (去掉 , 和 the) Dalian, (去掉so) there are (加 many) recreational facilities( I have played, only playing 改为 : but I had only played) a rocket bungee jumping, too (stimulation 改为 stimulating).
twenty-second session of Tsingtao brewstery Festival Entertainment District 这个地方名字太长,本人没有去过,也不知是否正确,所以无法替你改错.
替你改好了,希望会对你有助,并望满意采纳,谢谢.

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