我写的是《My healthe lifestyl》
内容:I get up at 7.am,then,I usually go run.After that,I have my breakfast,The last,I go to school.I like to eat fruit and vegetables,and I never eat rubbish food.I always pay attention to my diet,and also have a balance between the feminine gender food and the masculine gender food.
15分的满分作文可以拿多少分？
3分go run.错了是go running go +V ing ，like to eat fruit and vegetables错了，此句子意思为我想吃水果和蔬菜，应该是like eating fruit and vegetables， rubbish food没junk food正宗！其他就是你才57个词，而且略缺乏文采，你可以总分总的写首先总写大多数人的生活方式，最后在来一句总，如 this is me ，you look a sunny boy
I get up at 7.am. Firstly, I usually go running.After that,I have my breakfast. Then I go to school.I like to eat fruit and vegetables and I never eat junk food.I always pay attention to my diet,and also have a balanced diet. (between the feminine gender food and the masculine gender food.)去掉。
其实，表示阴性食物和阳性食物就用很简单的yin food 和yang food 就可以了。
这篇作文，我只能给5分。
9分
开头太罗嗦了。
After that,I have my breakfast,The last,I go to school。这两句话其实可以合成一句。
Rubbish food应该换成junk food