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修改我的一段英文对话。谢谢。

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  • 提问者网友:沉默菋噵
  • 2021-08-20 19:21

Ps- 本人自己修改自己的英文实在是没有啥头绪。

所以恳请哪位帮帮忙。标点或者大小写方面就直接忽略。谢谢咯 -0-

 

Dear Jacob,Mr. Fried Arm,

 

      You probably wouldn't see this, but I decided  to write it anyway. First of all, you really upsetted me about the fact that you've never say goodbye to me though it really wasnt your fault.However, i really had a good time with you and you are actually the first american guy who i dont feel werid or uncomfortable with when we are being together. Remeber the little  rock we tried to dig out from the trash can?  You said that it was stupid to spent over half hour digging in a  trash can searching for a small rock thats adjacent to another rock, and having customers watching us to do such an idiotic thing.  But I forgot to tell you something, which is that the reason why I like that rock is because I like its shape, it's in a   shape of a broken heart, and the most important of all, everytime when i look at it, i'll think of you guys, and the wonderful time we had together. (coughing, i guess its getting too dramatic ) Anyhows, dear Mr Fried Arm, have fun with  your trip in NYC in september and whish i can see you again

 

 

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  • 五星知识达人网友:猎心人
  • 2021-08-20 20:12

以下按顺序修改:1。wouldn't like to see    2.first of all ,it really upest me that you've.......your fault.


  3.who i don't feel worried or uncomfortable when we are together.


 4.Do you remeber  the ......can?    5.   it was stupid to spend over half an hour digging in a trash can to


  search for a  small rock    6. BUt i forgot to tell you something that the reason  for i like that rock  .It is  because .......shape    7.every  time when ......


8 .Anyhow.....i had  fun with you when we were trip in NYC in september . I wish i can see you  again


省略号就代表相应的你写的内容。


另外,最后应该有落款 就是你的名字。以上就是我认为应该修改的错误内容,还有希望你不要一句话写得太长,有and的,最好断成两句.

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