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last sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital

we bought her some flowe and furit .she was glad to see

us. many people began to avoid see her after she

was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the

HIV virus must not be infected through daile communication

and those suffering form AIDS should not be looked down up on

we had a talk with the woman and gave her some

CDs as gifts . she was moved to tears and promise to be

optimistic and confident in overcoming the diswase . we

promistic to see her again befort left.

in my opinion,the world will become more beautiful

if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble

last sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital in the hospital

we bought her some flowe and furit .she was glad to see flowers and fruits

us. many people began to avoid see her after she to see

was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the to biancheng by

HIV virus must not be infected through daile communication

and those suffering form AIDS should not be looked down upon those who

we had a talk with the woman and gave her some had talks

CDs as gifts . she was moved to tears and promise to be promised

optimistic and confident in overcoming the diswase . we

promistic to see her again befort left.

in my opinion,the world will become more beautiful

if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble

last sunday we went to see an AIDS patient in hospital

we bought her some flowers and fruits.she was glad to see

us.Many people began to avoid see her after she

was infected with HIV virus. A doctor told us that the

HIV virus cannot be infected through daily communication

and those suffering form AIDS should not be looked down upon

we had a talk with the woman and gave her some

CDs as gifts . she was moved to tears and promised to be

optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. we

promised to see her again before leaving.

in my opinion,the world will become more beautiful

if all of us love each other and help those in trouble

Last sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital.

We bought her some flowers and fruits .She was glad to see

us. Many people began to avoid seeing her after she

was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the

HIV virus can not be infected through daily communication

and those suffering from AIDS should not be looked down upon

We had a talk with the woman and gave her some

CDs as gifts . she was moved to tears and promised to be

optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease . We

promise to see her again before we left.

In my opinion,the world will become more beautiful

if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble.

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