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Dear Mike

I'm glad to hear that you are come to Beijing soon. I have planned an one-day

trip for you .

In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace , where is one of the most beautiful park in Beijing . There you can go boating and climbing . It was also

a nice piace for taking pictures . Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a

Chinese lunch .

On the afternoon , I suggest that you visit Peking University . As you know , it is famous not only in China ang also in the world . Finally , before you return back

to your hotel , you can visit the Book Town . There are different kinds of books as

well many Chinese paintings . I hope we will have a good time .

Best wishes!

Yours ,

Li Hua

Dear Mike

I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon. I have planned an one-day

trip for you .

In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace , which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing . There you can go boating and climbing . It is also

a nice place for taking pictures . Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a

Chinese lunch .

In the afternoon , I suggest that you visit Peking University . As you know , it is famous not only in China but also in the world . Finally , before you back

to your hotel , you can visit the Book Town . There are different kinds of books as

well asmany Chinese paintings . I hope we will have a good time .

Best wishes!

Yours ,

Li Hua

Dear Mike

I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon. I have planned an one-day

trip for you .

In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace , where is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing . There you can go boating and climbing . There was also

a nice piace for taking pictures . Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a

Chinese lunch .

In the afternoon , I suggest that you visit Peking University . As you know , it is famous not only in China ang also in the world . Finally , before you return (back )(去掉）

to your hotel , you can visit the Book Town . There are different kinds of books as

well(as) many Chinese paintings . I hope we will have a good time .

Best wishes!

Yours ,

Li Hua

第一排：come->coming;

第三排：where->which;

第四排：was->is;

第七排：On->In;

第八排：ang(你打错了，应该是and)->but;

第十排：well后面加as

come->coming

where->which

was->is

On the afternoon->In the afternoon

ang also ->but also

return back ->go back

as well many ->as well as many

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