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  • 提问者网友:献世佛
  • 2021-04-11 13:53

Good aternoon, my teacher. I am Pod from class two.

I have done a survey about Activities. What do students do at our school? Let me show you the results of my survey. In our junior, most students like sports very much. We only have P.E. class twice a week. So, we don’t have much time to do sports. In spite of this, the students exersice eveyday before evening class. What do they usually do at this time? Most students go to the gym and play basketball. The students who are from class 2 said they love basketball so much! Some students also play badminton. And some students play football on the playgroud if it doesn’t rain. As for girls, most of them likes to jump. The girls who are from class3 can jump very well. Some of them Skip rubber band, too.

They have a very nice time at school. So, this is about my survey.

帮修改一下, 估计语法错误蛮多的、

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  • 五星知识达人网友:青尢
  • 2021-04-11 14:11

第1行第2个单词改为afternoon,my teacher 中间加个dear


第2行Activities改为activities


第3行 We only have P.E. class twice a week 前面加个But,然后we小写,这样更好一些。


第4行In spite of this改为In spite of it更好,the students 去掉the。 before evening class 加个the


第6行said改为say,虽然是过去说的,但全文都是一般现在,用say就可以


第7行likes改为like. some students play football on the playgroud if it doesn’t rain ,students 后面应加个will,一般现在表将来。


第8行Skip改为skip,小写


最后一句,So, this is about my survey改为That's all for my survey.

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  • 1楼网友:笑迎怀羞
  • 2021-04-11 16:16
操场是“playground”你写的是“playgroud”
  • 2楼网友:迟山
  • 2021-04-11 15:57
好aternoon,我的老师。波德我从类2。 我做了一个关于活动的调查。学生究竟在我们的学校怎么办?让我告诉你我的调查结果。在我们的初中,大多数学生喜欢运动非常。我们只有体育类每周两次。所以,我们没有太多时间做运动。尽管如此,前天晚上每班exersice eveyday。什么他们通常在这个时候怎么办?大多数学生去健身房和打篮球。谁的学生从2级,据说他们热爱篮球这么多!有些学生还打羽毛球。还有一些学生玩足球的playgroud如果不下雨。至于女孩,他们最喜欢跳。女孩们谁,都可以从系列3跳非常好。其中一些跳过橡皮筋,也。 他们有一个非常好的学校的时间。因此,这是我的调查。 搜索
  • 3楼网友:白昼之月
  • 2021-04-11 14:42
第1行第2个单词afternoon。
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