书面表达：(15分) 假如你是Li Ming， 看到上述的帖子后，请结合下面的内容提示，写一篇80个词左右的回帖与大家一起分享。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数，文中不能出现真实姓名和

书面表达：(15分) 假如你是Li Ming， 看到上述的帖子后，请结合下面的内容提示，写一篇80个词左右的回帖与大家一起分享。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数，文中不能出现真实姓名和校名，请将答案填写在答卷相应的位置上。）
内容提示：
1. 自己认为同学们上网有好处也有坏处。
2. 指出同学们上网的优缺点分别是什么？
3. 告诉同学们应如何正确使用电脑和网络。
My name is Li Ming . I don’t agree with all of them .

My name is Li Ming . I don’t agree with all of them .I think they can be good and they can be bad,too. The Internet has become important. Many students love getting online.It can help us do lost of things.We can get more information from it.We can also write e-mails or chat with our friends.But they have brought problems.If we are online too long.it will be bad for our health.Some students spend too much time playing games.I think we shouldn’t get online too long.We should use them as a tool,not a toy to play with.

(答案→)My name is Li Ming . I don’t agree with all of them .I think they can be good and they can be bad,too. The Internet has become important. Many students love getting online.It can help us do lost of things.We can get more information from it.We can also write e-mails or chat with our friends.But they have brought problems.If we are online too long.it will be bad for our health.Some students spend too much time playing games.I think we shouldn’t get online too long.We should use them as a tool,not a toy to play with. 解析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be bad for对……有害；too much许多，大量等。本句中连词使用也较多，如果and和，并且；or或者；if如果等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

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