现在越来越多的学生骑电动车(motor bicycle)上学，请结合所给内容谈谈自己的看法。内容要点：1、有很多优点，如方便省时；2、但是价格比自行车贵得多，有的人骑得太快、不走自

现在越来越多的学生骑电动车(motor bicycle)上学，请结合所给内容谈谈自己的看法。
内容要点：1、有很多优点，如方便省时；
2、但是价格比自行车贵得多，有的人骑得太快、不走自行车道（cycle way）会造成事故；
3、应该尽量步行或骑自行车上学。 与骑电动自行车相比，更有助于省钱，安全，保持健康，还有益于保护环境。
注意：1.不要逐词逐句地翻译。2.为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节。
3.词数100左右。开头已给出。
Nowadays, more and more students go to school by motor bicycle. Nowadays, more and more students go to school by motor bicycle. There are many advantages of riding a motor bicycle, for example, it is convenient and saves time. However, a motor bicycle costs much more than a bike. Besides, some students always ride too fast and sometimes they do not ride on the cycleway, which leads to many accidents.

(答案→)Nowadays, more and more students go to school by motor bicycle. There are many advantages of riding a motor bicycle, for example, it is convenient and saves time. However, a motor bicycle costs much more than a bike. Besides, some students always ride too fast and sometimes they do not ride on the cycleway, which leads to many accidents. 解析：本文是一篇表达观点的文章，要点都已经给出。在写作时候要注意选择较高级的词汇如Compared with，convenient等，适当再使用较高级的句型和合适的连词如Besides等让文章更流畅。

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