看一下这段话有语法错误吗?

看一下这段话有语法错误吗?
When I was a child,I met a boy,the boy looks like an egg.And...The boy is you!OK,OK,just a joke.You’re a clever and sunning boy.I hope you don’t forget me,forever and forever.
无论这段话标点错,还是语法哪里有错,只要有错,就请你们帮我改过来.只需要把这段话复制,然后把错了的改过来就OK了.

When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looks like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunning boy. I hope you don’t forget me, forever and forever
the boy （looked） like an egg.
I hope you （won’t） forget me.
就这两个错的

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