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The Great changes in Wuxi
As we konw, Great changes have taken place for recent years, then we are learning in the new school,the buildings are growing taller and taller,people's living conditions are becoming more and more comfortable,and the cars,buses,computers,3G cellphones have gone into our life quickly.We are sure that our hometown has become more and more beautiful.
The other way says "the more we get,the more we'll lose",so if we live in the tall buildings,we will feel lonley,because we have less chance to get along well with our neighbors.The comfortable living conditions will make us lazy,and the cars,buses can cause so much pollution,computers,cellphones are quite harm to our eyes, what's more,we can see that the face of Baiyang River is become dirtier and dirtier
There are two sides for everything,我们应“三思而后行”。
以上就是全部内容了，最后一句汉语帮我翻译成英语
有什么语法错误，词语运用错误或认为不恰当的地方的就帮我指出来吧
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The Great changes in Wuxi
As we konw, Great changes have taken place for（for改为in） recent years, then(改为Now,因为此处你用的是进行时态) we are learning in the new school,the buildings are growing taller and taller,people's living conditions are becoming more and more comfortable,and the cars,buses,computers,3G cellphones have gone into our life quickly.We are sure that our hometown has become（改为 is becoming） more and more beautiful.
The other way says(On the other hand, some people hold the view that) "the more we get,the more we'll lose",so if we live in the tall buildings,we will feel lonley,because we have less chance (less chance 改为fewer chances)to get along well with our neighbors.The comfortable living conditions will make us lazy,and the cars,buses can cause so much pollution,computers,cellphones are quite harm（harmful） to our eyes, what's more,we can see that the face of Baiyang River is become(becoming) dirtier and dirtier
There are two sides for everything,我们应“三思而后行”。
(最后这句你可以这样表达，Since every coin has two sides, wo should look before we leap.)
have gone into 改为are coming into cellphones are quite harm to 改为cellphones are quite harmful to
what's more改为what's worse 意思是更糟的是。we can see that the face of Baiyang River is become dirtier and dirtier改为we can see the face that Baiyang River is become dirtier and dirtier.
There are two sides for everything.改为 as the saying goes ,every coin has two sides比较好一点。我们应“三思而后行”。we need to think carefully before taking action.
We need to think well then acting.
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