这段时间，雾霾成为备受社会关注的焦点; 改善污染现状、反思生活方式成为人们关心的问题。请根据以下要点写一篇保护环境的短文，并谈谈你的观点。1、目前，地球变得越来越拥挤和污染。如何保

这段时间，雾霾成为备受社会关注的焦点; 改善污染现状、反思生活方式成为人们关心的问题。请根据以下要点写一篇保护环境的短文，并谈谈你的观点。
1、目前，地球变得越来越拥挤和污染。如何保护环境已成为当今世界最大的难题之一；
2、空气质量变得越来越差，损害人们的健康；
3、废水污染河流，杀死大量的鱼；
4、政府应该投入全部努力去阻止污染和改善环境；
5、人们应该改变不健康的生活方式。你的建议......
注意：1、文章必须包含所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2、第5个要点要用1~2句话发表自己的观点；
3、词数80左右（开头已给出的内容不计入字数）。
At present ,Earth is becoming

At present, Earth is becoming more and more crowded and polluted. How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world now. The quality of the air is getting worse and worse. It does harm to people’s health. Waste water pollutes rivers and a lot of fish have died. The government should put all its effort into preventing pollution and improving the environment. People should change their unhealthy life styles. I think more people should go to work by bus instead of by car.

(答案→)At present, Earth is becoming more and more crowded and polluted. How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world now. The quality of the air is getting worse and worse. It does harm to people’s health. Waste water pollutes rivers and a lot of fish have died. The government should put all its effort into preventing pollution and improving the environment. People should change their unhealthy life styles. I think more people should go to work by bus instead of by car. 解析：这篇短文要求我们以现在我们的环境现状为话题写一篇作文。最近一段时间雾霾非常严重，这也引起了很多人的反思，我们地球的环境问题。在题目中为我们列出了几个要点，我们需要用正确的英语将其表达出来，并且在文中要有自己的观点。所以写作时一定要注意不要遗漏要点，并且表达要流畅，语句要通顺。通过审题我们可知该篇作文应主要使用一般现在时，要注意使用较好的短语或句型使文章有条理，内容充实。【亮点说明】这篇范文是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先文章内容充实完整，概括了题目中要求的所有要点，并有自己的观点。其次这篇短文表达流畅，意思连贯。在文中出现了大量较好的句型句式，长短句结合，使文章更有节奏感。如How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world now.、It does harm to people’s health.、The government should put all its effort into preventing pollution and improving the environment、I think more people should go to work by bus instead of by car等。

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