希望有人改一下我的烂英语作文。英语作文实在写得太差了。此图如下。
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- 提问者网友：杀生予夺
- 2021-03-28 06:01
希望有人改一下我的烂英语作文。英语作文实在写得太差了。此图如下。
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- 五星知识达人网友：醉吻情书
- 2021-03-28 06:21
第一段从第二句起改为：From your email, I know you have trouble in making friend in the new school. Here are some advice for you.追答第二段改为：
First of all, if you want to make friends, you’d better make a good friend and need to share happiness and sadness with them. It’s important for you to know a friend in need is a friend indeed.第三段：use my advice 改为take my advice ; call 要改为 calls ; put 前要加to; It’s need time 要改为 It needs time.最后一段：with you 要调到句末，will 后面要用原形make。最后一句改为I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.如还有疑问，欢迎追问，有问必答！
感谢网友们的先后采纳感谢楼主的采纳
First of all, if you want to make friends, you’d better make a good friend and need to share happiness and sadness with them. It’s important for you to know a friend in need is a friend indeed.第三段：use my advice 改为take my advice ; call 要改为 calls ; put 前要加to; It’s need time 要改为 It needs time.最后一段：with you 要调到句末，will 后面要用原形make。最后一句改为I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.如还有疑问，欢迎追问，有问必答！
感谢网友们的先后采纳感谢楼主的采纳
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