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  • 提问者网友:城市野鹿
  • 2021-04-24 05:52

我们搞了一个英语作文投稿的什么东西.....大家帮忙看下有没有语法错误吧...急啊..在线等....拜托各位了...

 

   I have read some words about study.I think "No pains,no gains" looks common, but it is one of the most useful and the most important .Ji Xianlin had written an article named "My Middle School Period".He said,"There is no royal road to learning."I am not a complicated child, so I don't want to say some complicated words.Mr Ji is a sincere person,he said he was common when he was young.But his uncle and his good teachers encouranged him to study hard,and he really got good grades at last because of his conscientious attitude and a conscientious heart.We are all students.But if we use our conscientious hearts to study,to treat frustration in our lives, we will make our study ,our lives better.Don't you think so? In fact,sometimes I am a lazy student ,I always hate doing much homework and study hard.I think it is too difficult for me to be the winner,to be an achiever,to suffer ,to feel pain .But when I see my grandmother cooks tired,my mother works tired and so on,I am always ashamed.I know that with great determination,perseverance and passion,I can destory all difficulties.When I want to give up,I often read Mr Ji's book and think of my familes' tired ,more and more white hair,more and more coarse hands,I must do my best every time!We can attain whatever goal we set in our mind.Struggle will shape my character,suffering will strengthen my determination.I know only harsh training and an intense life can bring out my full potential.I know all those trials will become my most valuable treasure!I know that the more hardship I endure,the more glorious my life will ultimately be!Mr Ji's words encourage me to do everything better.I am grateful to him.That's all.Thank you for your listening!

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  • 五星知识达人网友:西岸风
  • 2021-04-24 06:41
没什么错误,不过有些句子很别扭,下午用电脑给你发点建议
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  • 1楼网友:从此江山别
  • 2021-04-24 08:51

our lives better. 这边就写 a better study and a better life

but it is one of the most useful and the most important  xxxx 感觉少了点什么

YOU HV DONE A GREAT WORK.

  • 2楼网友:你哪知我潦倒为你
  • 2021-04-24 08:11
It is so perfect that I can find nothing wrong.祝你演讲顺利!
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