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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you ma

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  • 提问者网友:焚苦与心
  • 2021-12-29 01:50
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意:1.无须写标题, 不得照抄英语提示语;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4.词数为120左右。Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always availabe. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
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  • 五星知识达人网友:廢物販賣機
  • 2021-12-29 01:58
(答案→)Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always availabe. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. 解析:本文只是给出了一个提示:你无法选择别人给你的事物,的是你可以选择你如何使用它们的方式。属于开放性作文。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。要点:1.列举实例来说明重要的是我们利用别人所给事物的方法更为重要,可以使用身边发生的事情。2.表示自己的观点。如:无论以后发生什么事情,我们都要冷静,并仔细选择合适的方法。【亮点说明】范文中对于连接词的使用非常到位,如besides等;另外句中的高级句式,如Disappointed as I felt….;whenever I had difficulties….;It is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are。
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  • 1楼网友:不如潦草
  • 2021-12-29 02:30
就是这个解释
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