根据下面所给的提示写一篇6０词左右的短文，要求内容完整，语言规范。 杰克上周五过生日。他邀请了我和一些同学参加他的生日聚会。我买了一本书作为生日礼物，坐地铁下午5:30到他家。杰克

根据下面所给的提示写一篇6０词左右的短文，要求内容完整，语言规范。
杰克上周五过生日。
他邀请了我和一些同学参加他的生日聚会。
我买了一本书作为生日礼物，坐地铁下午5:30到他家。
杰克很高兴，并很喜欢这个礼物。
我们一起唱歌、跳舞，玩得很开心。







　It was Jack's birthday last Friday. He invited some classmates and me to come to his birthday party. I bought a book as a gift and took the subway to his home. It was 5:30 p.m when I got there. Jack was very happy and he liked the gift. We sang and danced together, and we enjoyed ourselves.

(答案→)　It was Jack's birthday last Friday. He invited some classmates and me to come to his birthday party. I bought a book as a gift and took the subway to his home. It was 5:30 p.m when I got there. Jack was very happy and he liked the gift. We sang and danced together, and we enjoyed ourselves. 解析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据提纲内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，要以第一人称来写，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文比较平实，主要使用了许多并列句，重点描述我们在杰克生日宴会上的情景，简明扼要,精炼有序;

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