Could you check my English passage please?Thanks a lot !
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- 提问者网友：几叶到寒
- 2021-02-13 02:28
Could you check my English passage please?Thanks a lot !
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- 五星知识达人网友：一把行者刀
- 2021-02-13 02:36
An Unforgettable Day
In our colorful lifes,there are lots of different things happen every day.Some of them are ineresting,and there are also something move me.
One month ago,I was taking a bus back to my home as usual.The bus was really crowded.It was already 5:30.But I was still on the bus.The evening had fellen.The weather became cold and rainy.I was very worried because it was too late,my mother must be waiting me at home for dinner.But I couldn’t do anything except hoping the bus can run quickly as it could.
More haste,less speed.Wasn’t it?When the bus made a turn to a lane.Another No.3 bus came opposite.That means one of the driver should give way. “Will the driver say some sharp words? The driver often feels irascible in rush hour.Oh,that must be the worst thing. And it will make me feel more terrible!”I said to myself. But out of my expect,the driver got off the bus. He walked to the driver of the other bus .It rained hard outside.The driver saddenly got wet.A passenge gave the driver an umbrella quickly.The driver said something to that driver.When he got on the bus again, he said thank you to that passenge
In our colorful lifes,there are lots of different things happen every day.Some of them are ineresting,and there are also something move me.
One month ago,I was taking a bus back to my home as usual.The bus was really crowded.It was already 5:30.But I was still on the bus.The evening had fellen.The weather became cold and rainy.I was very worried because it was too late,my mother must be waiting me at home for dinner.But I couldn’t do anything except hoping the bus can run quickly as it could.
More haste,less speed.Wasn’t it?When the bus made a turn to a lane.Another No.3 bus came opposite.That means one of the driver should give way. “Will the driver say some sharp words? The driver often feels irascible in rush hour.Oh,that must be the worst thing. And it will make me feel more terrible!”I said to myself. But out of my expect,the driver got off the bus. He walked to the driver of the other bus .It rained hard outside.The driver saddenly got wet.A passenge gave the driver an umbrella quickly.The driver said something to that driver.When he got on the bus again, he said thank you to that passenge
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- 1楼网友：平生事
- 2021-02-13 03:52
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- 2楼网友：有你哪都是故乡
- 2021-02-13 02:43
In our colorful lives,there are lots of different things happened every day.Some of them are ineresting,and there are also something move me.
One month ago,I was taking a bus back to my home as usual.The bus was really crowded.It was already 5:30.But I was still on the bus.The evening had fellen.The weather became cold and rainy.I was very worried because it was too late,my mother must be waiting me at home for dinner.But I couldn’t do anything except hoping the bus can run quickly as it could.
More haste,less speed.Wasn’t it?When the bus made a turn to a lane.Another No.3 bus came opposite.That means one of the driver should give way. “Will the driver say some sharp words? The driver often feels irascible in rush hour.Oh,that must be the worst thing. And it will make me feel more terrible!”I said to myself. But out of my expect,the driver got off the bus. He walked to the driver of the other bus .It rained hard outside.The driver saddenly got wet.A passenge gave the driver an umbrella quickly.The driver said something to that driver.When he got on the bus again, he said thank you to that passenge.
One month ago,I was taking a bus back to my home as usual.The bus was really crowded.It was already 5:30.But I was still on the bus.The evening had fellen.The weather became cold and rainy.I was very worried because it was too late,my mother must be waiting me at home for dinner.But I couldn’t do anything except hoping the bus can run quickly as it could.
More haste,less speed.Wasn’t it?When the bus made a turn to a lane.Another No.3 bus came opposite.That means one of the driver should give way. “Will the driver say some sharp words? The driver often feels irascible in rush hour.Oh,that must be the worst thing. And it will make me feel more terrible!”I said to myself. But out of my expect,the driver got off the bus. He walked to the driver of the other bus .It rained hard outside.The driver saddenly got wet.A passenge gave the driver an umbrella quickly.The driver said something to that driver.When he got on the bus again, he said thank you to that passenge.
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