帮我检查一下我写的英语作文,检查一下语法、词组

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提问者网友：你给我的爱
2021-05-22 21:30

帮我检查一下我写的英语作文,检查一下语法、词组
Today is Sunday.It's Lily'birthday.She wears beautifully today.My friends and I buy her many presents,like chocolate,cards,toys,
comic books and so on.We play happily.Some sing and some dance.At last,we sing a birthday song,then have a cake.Lily looks happy,she
says thanks to us,we all laugh.And we have good time today.

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五星知识达人网友：梦中风几里
2021-05-22 21:56

Today is Sunday.It was Lily's birthday.She wore beautiful today.My friends and I bought her many presents,like chocolate,cards,toys,
comic books and so on.We played happily.Some sang and some dance.At last,we sang a birthday song,then had a cake.Lily looked happily,she said thanks to us,we all laughed.And we had a good time today.

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