英语修改三句话

请帮我修改下这句话，让句子更优美，或者通畅，简洁些~谢谢了
When the alarm interrupted my pleasant dream and made me wake up, I was really confused with the ceiling of my dorm room. It seemed to be so similar to the one in my Chinese home，until I had felt the cold air coming out from the air-conditioner. This ruthlessly and completely brought me back to the reality. And the reality was that I realized that I missed my family and friends so much that I felt lonely.
中文就是，当闹钟让我从美梦中醒来，双眼睁开，我突然被寝室的天花板所迷惑住。它是那么像我在中国家里那个天花板。直到从空调涌出的冰冷的空气将我拖回了现实，我才意识到我还是身在异国，才意识到，我是多么思念自己的家人和朋友。
就这个意思吧~~

When the alarm, which interrupted my sweet dream, waked me up, I had been deeply attracted by the ceiling of my dorm, which seemed to be incredible similar to the ceiling of my home. The cool air that drew me back to the real life was coming out from the air-conditionerand. I realized that I was in a foreign countries and I missed my family and friends so much indeed which lead me feel exceedingly lonely!

你上面的这句话本来就带着很多的语法错误，而且感觉非常的空洞，就是改完了，效果也不是很好，希望可以给我你的中心主旨，我可以重新帮你写一段，请百度Hi我，如果我不在，可以给我留言！

我已经根据你的中文更改了我的答案，希望你能满意！

When the alarm interrupted my sweet dream, I wake up confused with the ceiling of my dorm room. It seemed to be so similar to the one in my Chinese home，until I felt the cold air coming from the air-conditioner. This ruthlessly and completely brought me back to the reality which made me feel so lonely. I deeply missed my family and friends!

3.＊ he keeps swim every day. he keeps swimming "ewery" day    写错了，every

8.＊ my mother cook very good food. my mother cooks very good to food   (my mother cooks food very good )

10.＊ he not knows my name. he doesn't" knows" my name     know 不能加s，前面有doesn't

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