Today is a suuny day . The weather is very hot.I got up very early.My cousin came to my house.He is a very kind person.We enjoyed ourselves.He gave me a gift.It's a lovely doll.I like it very much.And then he said goodbye to us.
请大家帮我找找错，再顺便帮我填几句，我想不出来还要写什么了，帮帮忙呀！！
从第二句开始，你就用错了，典型的中文式英语，应该用：It is very hot.还有，你后面两句用过去时态可以，但你要标明时间状语啊，比如说，this morning之类的，第五句，又是中文式英语，只要用：He is very kind就可以了，还有最重要的一点是，你要用过去式就用在一起，不要交错，这样的话，作文会很低分的。
Today was Sunny.The weather was very hot.I got up very early.My cousin came to my home.He is a very kind person.We enjoyed ourselves.He gave me a gift.It was a lovely doll.I like it very much.And then he said goodbye to us.
你写的是今天 那就用现在时态 干嘛后面都用过去时态
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