谁能用自己的话改一边~

谁能用自己的话改一边~
Twenty years from now,the cloud service will develop for human to manage all our documents bookmarks,emails applications and music were available from anywhere and from any device when the any time.That is what cloud computing is all about:being creative,being entertained and being organized in an ever-changing digital age.
是再用英文写一边。用自己的话。改写。不是翻译~

觉得原句有些语言问题啊
In the next twenty years,the development of the cloud service will facilitate humans in managing documents,bookmarks,emails,applications and music,so we can access the resources from any device anywhere and anytime.What cloud computing brings to the table is its creativity,entertainment and organization in an ever-evolving digital era.
再问： 那你改正了吗~我不会唉~

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