英语短文的改错

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,Miss Fang. I'd like to your penfriend,and get to know more about your country.

First,let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua.I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China.I go to Hongqi Middle School.We study quite a few subject,such as math, Chinese,English and physics, I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.

Do you play any ball games?What your favourite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

谢谢哈··很急····

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,Miss Fang. I'd like to be your penfriend and get more about your country.

Firstly,let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua.I live in Beijing,which is the capital of China.I've studied at Hongqi Middle School.We have quite a few subject,such as math, Chinese,English and physics, I use to playing ping-pong during my spare time, but now I am interested in playing football.

Do you play any ball games?What is your favourite sport?

look forward to hear from you soon.

Your Faithfully

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Hello. I knew you through my ET, MF. I'd like to be you pf and learn more about you r country.

First, let me introduce myself. My name is LH. I live in the capital of China---Beijing. I go to HMS in which we learn several subjects, such as M, C, E and P. I use to spent most of my spare time playing PP, but now I play football more.

Are you involved in any ball games? What is your favorite one? I am looking forward to hear from you.

英文要简洁。呵呵

Dear Bob,

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Hello. I learned about you from my English teacher,Miss Fang. I'd like to be your penfriend and get to know more about your country.

First,let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua.I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China.I am in Hongqi Middle School.We study quite a few subject,such as math, Chinese,English and physics, I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.

Do you play any ball games?What is your favourite sport? I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

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