帮忙看一下这篇作文有错误么?
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- 提问者网友:我没有何以琛的痴心不悔
- 2021-06-05 14:51
Computers are changing our life day by day. We can do many things on computers. For example, we can write articles, do office work and play games. But the most important usage of computers is to get on the Internet. We can do more things on the Intemet. We may do shopping, search information and communicate with people all around the world. In short,computers and Internet are making our life more and more convenient.
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- 五星知识达人网友:玩家
- 2021-06-05 15:59
But the most important usage of computers is to get on the Internet,这个句子把get 改为surf 浏览更好一点点,We can do more things on the Intemet,这个句子后面最好加一个 now,表示比较,呼应句子中的more,We may do shopping, search information and communicate with people all around the world. 这个句子中的search和communicate都要加ing,其他的没了
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- 1楼网友:青灯有味
- 2021-06-05 18:49
使用电脑的最重要的是让在互联网上。??(病句)
- 2楼网友:老鼠爱大米
- 2021-06-05 18:34
可以直接用Computer单数来表示“电脑”这个名词,因为本文中似乎关键不强调电脑的单复数,其他没有语法或原则性错误,OK~
- 3楼网友:有你哪都是故乡
- 2021-06-05 17:23
Computers are changing our life everyday
或者Computers change our life day by day
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