英语短文改错啊......

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解决时间 2021-06-04 07:18

提问者网友：川水往事
2021-06-03 20:51

将此文章改正 1.错误处每处错误限1词 2.只允许改10处(可能不到10处)

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五星知识达人网友：妄饮晩冬酒
2021-06-03 21:53

很乐意帮你改，但是短文呢？

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1楼网友：等灯
2021-06-03 22:13

When I heard the news the famous singer Emil would come to People Theater to give a performance,immediately I ordered five tickets . Finally the day coming I was looking forward to it. We went there on bus with excitement because we could hear him singing face to face. All the song lovers present got excitied the moment he appeared. Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music. The concert was a great success. After we returned home, we kept talking about it so that we couldn't fall asleep.

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