这英语句子是否正确?One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend

这英语句子是否正确?
One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend for advice and then they offer him some and encourage him to the dance party.

修改后句子：
One day,Tom got in trouble and asked his friend for advice and then he (或her) offered him some and encouraged him to go to the dancing party.
有2个问题：
1、时态不一致：
本段话以过去时为主,所以部分动词需要调整形式.
2、部分短语使用错误：
遇到麻烦：get in trouble 不需要a
3、人称不一致
they 应改为he或her
4、舞会应该是dancing party,且the dancing party前应该加go to

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