根据所给要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，词数80个左右，内容要点如下：Peter和父母呆在香港已有两天了。昨天，他们前往迪士尼乐园（Disneyland）。那是一个著名的主题公园。在入

根据所给要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，词数80个左右，内容要点如下：
Peter和父母呆在香港已有两天了。
昨天，他们前往迪士尼乐园（Disneyland）。那是一个著名的主题公园。
在入口处他们一起合影。下午晚些时候，迪士尼人物大游行开始了。
表演者们都穿着不同的服装，边行进边向他们挥手致意。
他们在那儿逗留了约八个小时， 玩得高兴。
Peter的感受（适当发挥1--2句）







Li Lei and his parents have been in Hong Kong for two days. Yesterday they went to Disneyland. That is a famous theme park. At the entrance they took photos together. A parade of Disney characters began later in the afternoon. The performers all wore different costumes and waved to people while they marched across the park. They stayed there for about eight hours and had fun. Li Lei thinks Disneyland is beautiful and he will never forget this meaningful experience.

(答案→)Li Lei and his parents have been in Hong Kong for two days. Yesterday they went to Disneyland. That is a famous theme park. At the entrance they took photos together. A parade of Disney characters began later in the afternoon. The performers all wore different costumes and waved to people while they marched across the park. They stayed there for about eight hours and had fun. Li Lei thinks Disneyland is beautiful and he will never forget this meaningful experience. 解析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料非常详细，并具有一定的逻辑关系。基本上按照材料内容翻译即可，注意文后表达彼得的感受。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去及完成时态，主语是单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

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