这是我写的，作文能力很不好的。突然有感而发写了这几句，帮我看看那些写错了或者要改下或添加什么的？提下意见也好。很急，快点哦。我会很感谢的
Being alone,ran on the playground in the early afternoon.
Being alone,i hope i can see the blue sky every day.
Being alone,i always cry early night.
Being alone,wish my heart not to be alone any longer­ .
I afraid of being alone every day!