改错，十处，打印错误不算

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提问者网友：爱了却不能说
2021-11-09 00:06

改错，十处，打印错误不算

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五星知识达人网友：一袍清酒付
2021-11-09 00:48

John was driving home from the station【1. 改by为in】his car yesterday evening【2. 改while为when】he had an accident. He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers【3. 改a为an】hour when another car came out of a side road and【4. 改 hitting 为 hit】him. 【5. 改All为Both】John and the other man were hurt. One of John‘s arms【6. 改were为was】broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head. Another car was following【7. 改John为John‘s】. It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out【8. 加上of】it.They ran to their cars and【9. 改had pulled为pulled】John and the other man out. Then they telephoned a doctor and【10. 改a为the】police. Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.

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John was driving home from the station in his car yesterday evening when he had an accident. He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers an hour when another car came out of a side road and hit him. Both John and the other man were hurt. One of John‘s arms was broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head. Another car was following John‘s. It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out of it.They ran to their cars and pulled John and the other man out. Then they telephoned a doctor and the police. Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.

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1楼网友：罪歌
2021-11-09 04:19

John was driving home from the station in his car yesterday evening when he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers an hour when another car came out of a side road and hit him.Both John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms was broken and the other man had a bad cut in his head.Another car was following John.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out of it.They ran to their cars and pulled John and the other man out .Then they telephoned a doctor and a policeman .Soon John and the other man were taken to a hospital.
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2楼网友：持酒劝斜阳
2021-11-09 03:10

John was driving home from the station by （by改成in) his car yesterday evening while (while改成when) he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers a（a改成an) hour when another car came out of a side road and hitting(hitting改成hit) him.All (All改成Both）John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms were（were改成was) broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John (John改成John's) .It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out (加介词of）it.They ran to their cars and had (删除had) pulled John and the other man out .Then they telephoned a doctor and a (a改成the) police .Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.

3楼网友：痴妹与他
2021-11-09 01:34

John was driving home from the station by 【去掉his】 car yesterday evening while he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers a hour when another car came out of a side road and 【hit】 him.【Both】John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms 【was】 broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out 【of】it.They ran to their cars and 【去掉had】pulled John and the other man out .Then they telephoned a doctor and a police .Soon John and the other man were【sent】to hospital.

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