求一篇世博会观后感，英语作文。

初中水平、

    I am so proud of my city——shanghai. For she has successfully held shanghai 2010 Expo,when i was there,i was astonishingly.I have never seen so many buildings like these before .I can hardly describe it in words,so beautiful and so magnificent . When i was in American pavilion，i have seen the most brillant screen in the world .  When i was in Germany pavilion, i was so excited about the big ball which can sway everywhere.There are so many magics in shanghai 2010 Expo,i am absorbed in it 。

我在家里写的哦，你可以找YY来帮我检查下语法错误。。虽然我觉得她读不懂。。哈哈

肖你自己写的？！金山词霸的吧。。。。

不过这种不适合8年级的吧。。老师会觉得她水平和平时不一样的

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