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假如你是李华,上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动,并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期

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  • 提问者网友:欺烟
  • 2021-02-08 16:57
假如你是李华,上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动,并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信,内容包括:交流活动中的收获;难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;感谢她送你的英文词典。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。提示词汇:文化交流周 Cultural Exchange WeekDear Kelly, I’ve been back home safely from England. Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!Yours,Li Hua
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  • 五星知识达人网友:轻熟杀无赦
  • 2021-02-08 18:24
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua



试题分析:本文是一篇书信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意一下几点:(1)内容要点要齐全;a交流活动中的收获;b难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感谢她送你的英文词典。(2)人称:以第一人称为主;(3)时态:一般过去时和一般现在时为主;(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅;(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型:(1)I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.(2)It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了过渡词语:What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短语:I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country.
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  • 1楼网友:零点过十分
  • 2021-02-08 19:28
dear kelly, i've been waiting to say all these and even more to you since i met you at the cultural exchange week. it might surprise you that i am writing to you; but you know, sometimes where there is too much to say, a man prefers writing to all else. the one we have built is a unique relationship. since that swing party, or the so-called 'cultural exchange week for high school students', hosted by my school, we both know how hopelessly my mind has been stuck with you ever since. it has been tacitly accepted by both of us without feeling the need to express anything poetically or melodramatically. like a sparkling crystal vase, you were delicate, fragile and precious to me. the dark, deep eyes set in contrast to the fair face had the depth and gleam that made me drown myself in your eyes. my subconscious pulled me close to you, to protest and to make you feel the same about me. i remember the first time i met you. it was one of the best moments of my life and i thank god for giving me such a moment. when i saw you, a tiny angel but a quiet lady who seemed to be in a similar plight, something out of this world, some force of attraction gave me the courage and initiative to approach you. i could not understand it then, but i am glad that you did not mind talking to me then. i could not understand why my body and mind reacted so funny to you, but the time we spent together was so enchanting that each moment without you was like epoch. i only knew how difficult it was for me to restrain myself from rushing to you and to concentrate on my work. in fact, whenever this tension had reached the crescendo, i called you up half-afraid that you would be angry over my disturbance during work. there was something else about you, though you were not readily sociable types. yet you seemed to tell me everything about you, your home, your feelings and your private habits while you gave me hospitality. i was your emotional support and it seemed to me that i occupied a special place in you. i remembered the evening i forced into your room. when you cried out your grief and sorrows into my bosom, the feeling of my being close to you, engulfing you in my arms seemed to make you feel uneasy and insecure. i felt extremely excited to give you this fright and dismay. and somewhere along the way, i rolled your rubber deeper without even realizing so and anything that bloated me from inside. i could not wait to share that frenzy feeling with you. we both saw it when i suddenly developed this deep and sensational pleasure. it was so enchanting and it completely finished me off when the void was filled. it gives me a great pride to show the world how much i have scored with you my petite delicate darling. my cherished moments are my cigarette break under the moonlit, under the clouds of my world and the soothing gaze of the silhouette of your sorrow back. the fact was hard to be accepted as i am madly in love with a girl who would completely treat her pal like trash afterwards. despite my premature performance, i don't think i deserve her insult at my achievement and the slap from her when she was swept of her feet. nevertheless, i thank you for your free hospitality, and that small size johnny you donated on me although i have never actually succeeded in entering with it. yours always, li hua
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