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  • 提问者网友:你给我的爱
  • 2021-05-01 22:29

The quite life of country is most city's peoples want to live palace, when peoples taik about the countryside they are always raptures, they think the city's population is booming and the competition increasing stiff. And city's enviroment have detrimental influence upon healthy, for exmple, contamination discharge exploit nayural resources. However countryside enviroment is great and can relay their balies, and ease their minds, people is very frendly; the clean atmosphere; the closeness to nature and the gentle pace of living. But this idyllic pastoral scene is only part of the picture.

 

Although countryside have more advantage, then most peoples still live in the rackate cities. As countryside si so great, why most people do not to live. In fact, the countryside is too inconvenient, in countryside you must tolerate misery, just like: loacl culture, and not more entertainment, that is very indifferent and most countryside is very impoverished. Though city's people often talk about countryside advantage, yet they are experience country's life is a little time, this is why most town's peoples talk about countryside advantage, they can't endure varied inconvieniment.

 

So, country is not perfect.

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  • 五星知识达人网友:鱼芗
  • 2021-05-01 23:27

the quite life of country is what most people in city expected.when people talk about the countryside they are always raptures, they think the population of city is booming and and the competition is increasing stiff. And the enviroment of city have detrimental influence upon healthy, for exmple, contamination discharge exploit nayural resources.  However the  enviroment of countryside is great.It can relay their balies and ease their minds.Also people are very friendly there.The clean atmosphere; the closeness to nature and the gentle way of living sounds so great. But this idyllic pastoral scene is only part of the picture.


Although there are more advantage living in countryside,most peoples still live in the rackate cities.countryside is so great, but why most people do not live there. In fact, the countryside is too inconvenient, in countryside you must tolerate misery, just like: loacl culture, and not more entertainment, that is very indifferent and most countryside is very impoverished. Though the people in cities often talk about the advantages of living in countryside,they only want to experience country life during a short time,they don't really want to live there.This is why most people in town talk about living in the countryside but never move to the countryside.They can't endure varied inconvieniment.


 So, country is not so perfect.


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