2010年安徽中考英语作文，这是我自己写的，有错误么？

Dear Sir and Madam, I am a middle school school,I read the newspaper know your company will build a factory in my hometown .I'm very happy,because it's good at my hometown's development ,I think everyone wants their hometomn become more beautiful.I'd love to ,but I feel worried ,because this will make my hometown become dirty .So I want your company to do following these :First ,don't drain dirty water in the river .Then, don't throw the trash and last plant more trees . I'm looking forward to hearing from you. You faithfully Zhang Hua 我提的那些建议不太好，大家帮我改一下！！！！谢了！！！！！

提的建议不错，只是写得太中国式了，以致于犯了很多语法错误，不过你一个初中生能写这么多，也挺不容易的。

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