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帮我看下以下的句子是否正确,谢谢了,

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  • 提问者网友:戎马万世
  • 2021-05-08 03:09

这是我写的作文,怕给到老师那里去出洋相,所以先放到这里,给你们看一下,文盲别来哈。

My best moment is look after my baby, he was a not only naughty but also clever boy. I am frequently shocked, so I have thought about how he taught well, he was so clever than it is a‘big’Work,because his idea was amusing. Once, he want a toy car, he said:‘mama,I had a dreamed in the night yesterday.’ ‘What were you dream of doing,baby?’ I asked, ‘ I had dreamed that will be owning a red toy sports car.’ he answered. However,I didn’t know how refuse his request,in the end,he owned a red toy sports car. Although his request is not good,It appears to me that I carn’t him request as long as that’s right.

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  • 五星知识达人网友:怀裏藏嬌
  • 2021-05-08 04:01

My best moment is look   (ing)    after my baby, he was    (改成is)    a not only naughty but also clever boy. I am frequently shocked, so I have thought about how he taught well  (这句话意思是怎么才能把他教好?那应该改成how to teach him well)    , he was so clever than it is a‘big’Work   (这句话建议删掉。。。不要搞些炫耀英语知识的句子。。。会被老师骂的╮(╯_╰)╭)    ,because his idea    (s)   was  (were )    amusing. Once, he want    (ed)    a toy car, he said:‘mama,I had a dreamed    (删掉ed)    in the    (改为 at)    night yesterday.’ ‘What were    (改为was)    you dream of doing,    (删掉后面的of doing,感觉怪怪的)    baby?’ I asked, ‘ I had dreamed that will be owning a red toy sports car.’ he answered. However,I didn’t know how (to)    refuse his request,in the end,he owned a red toy sports car. Although his request is (改成was)  not good,It appears to me that I carn’t him request as long as that’s right.


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  • 1楼网友:神鬼未生
  • 2021-05-08 08:25

My best moment is looking after my baby, he is  not only a naughty but also clever boy. I am frequently shocked, so I  think about how he should be taught well, he is so clever that it is a‘big’Work,because his idea was amusing. When day, he wanted a toy car, he said:‘mama,I  had a dream last night. ‘What  you dreamed baby?’ I asked, ‘ I dreamed that I would  own a red toy sports car.’ he answered. However,I didn’t know how to  refuse his request,in the end,i buy it for him. Although his request is not good,It appears to me that I ```````

最后一句写的撒没看懂   有些关联词不对劲   在仔细看看吧

  • 2楼网友:掌灯师
  • 2021-05-08 07:04

第一行:was looking after;I was frequently.

第二行:how to teach him well;then it was

第三行:want to have a toy car;I had a dream

第四行:that I will be owned to have a red toy sports car

第五行:I satisfy him request

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  • 3楼网友:廢物販賣機
  • 2021-05-08 06:21

费神啊

My happiest time is looking after my boy.

he is naughty but clever .

he usually gives me a surprise,

so I have been thinking about how he can be taught well,

in my eyes, he is  cleverer than anyone of his age,(不晓得你原文要表达什么意思)

because his ideas are so creative and amusing.

Once, he wanted a toy car.

he said:‘mama,I had a dream last night .’ ‘

What was your dream,baby?’ I asked,

‘ I  dreamed that i would have a red toy sports car.’ he answered.

since I didn’t know how to refuse his request,

in the end i bought him a red toy sports car.

Although his request was not good,It appeared to me that I couldn't refuse it as long as it was right.

  • 4楼网友:雪起风沙痕
  • 2021-05-08 05:03
我最好的时刻是照看一下我的孩子,他是一个不仅淘气但还聪明的男孩。我经常感到震惊,所以我认为他如何教好,他是如此的聪明比它是一个'big 'Work,因为他的想法是有趣的。有一次,他想要一个玩具车,他说:“妈妈,我有一个梦想”的yesterday.在晚上的时候,你梦想做,宝贝?”我问,“我梦见将拥有一个红色的玩具体育car.。”他回答。但是,我不知道如何拒绝他的要求,最后,他有一辆红色的玩具的跑车。尽管他的要求是不太好,我觉得我没有他要求肉欲”,只要那是不对的。 (你自己看看是不是有很多不对的地方)用词不当啊!!
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