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俗话说,上有天堂,下有苏杭。近年来,苏州吸引了世界各地的游客前观光旅游。为了使更多的外国朋友更好地了解这座城市,请根据以下提示一篇短文,词数:70左右。提示:1古老而优美的城市,

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  • 提问者网友:鐵馬踏冰河
  • 2021-11-29 05:23
俗话说,上有天堂,下有苏杭。近年来,苏州吸引了世界各地的游客前观光旅游。为了使更多的外国朋友更好地了解这座城市,请根据以下提示一篇短文,词数:70左右。
提示:1.古老而优美的城市,空气污染少,干净;
2.有很多美丽的园林(garden);每年有许多旅游者来这里游玩;
3.离上海近,乘汽车只需1小时;
4.在这里可以买到很好看的丝巾(silk scarves);品尝苏州美味的小吃
5.欢迎来苏州。Suzhou is an old and beautiful city. There is less air pollution here; the air is very fresh. There are also a lot of pretty gardens in Suzhou. Many visitors come here every year. Suzhou is very close to Shanghai. It only takes an hour to get to shanghai by bus. If you visit Suzhou, you can buy lots of nice silk scarves, taste Suzhou delicious snacks. Welcome to Suzhou! It is a really wonderful city!
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  • 五星知识达人网友:行雁书
  • 2019-03-09 17:48
(答案→)Suzhou is an old and beautiful city. There is less air pollution here; the air is very fresh. There are also a lot of pretty gardens in Suzhou. Many visitors come here every year. Suzhou is very close to Shanghai. It only takes an hour to get to shanghai by bus. If you visit Suzhou, you can buy lots of nice silk scarves, taste Suzhou delicious snacks. Welcome to Suzhou! It is a really wonderful city! 解析:这是一篇提纲作文,向游客介绍苏州,所以要用第三人称来写,并且用一般现在时。需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的文章。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数70左右,不要太多也不要太少。
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  • 2020-02-08 18:30
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