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  • 提问者网友:杀生予夺
  • 2021-08-18 07:07

三篇改错文章,每一行不一定都有错误,把错误改过来即可

The alarm was first gone off on the third floor.

People left the building hurriedly but in a orderly manner.

They came out carry their shopping bags and their parcels,

some not properly wrapped and some not even paid.

Most passer-by waited in the street to watch.Many of the

Shops and offices in the street had just closed.Mr.Clement,

the officer in charge of ordered all hoses

to turned to the roof of the main building.People were pushed

back from the area of their own safety.Seven officers

entered the basement or were driven back within minutes.

Hurriedly they put on their masks,ready to try again.

 

When I walked into the teacher was handing

in the tests.I was feeling very nervous.I had not studied

at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.

I went through the test for many times but I could only answer

three out from the twenty questions.I did not want to fail

the exam.Then,I put my book under my desk,opening it

and started looking for the answer.The teacher wasn`t

looking at me,but I copied something.Suddenly,I felt a hand

on my shoulder!The teacher caught me cheating.I don`t

know what to say.Luckily,the teacher did not punish for

cheating but instead gave me a second chance.

 

At Chinese New Year,my family and I have a very busy

time.Two days before New Year`s Day,I went out with my

friends form school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.

It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to,and the

food was delicious.After that,we went to shopping for new

clothes and found lots bargains.I visited my old teacher,

Mr.Smith.To my surprised,he said he didn`t find Chinese

New Year very excited.He was not even wearing new clothes!

Because we have so many tests this week,so I have to

Start studying hard again now.I wish the holiday were long.

最佳答案
  • 五星知识达人网友:傲气稳了全场
  • 2021-08-18 07:38

The alarm had first gone off on the third floor.


People left the building hurriedly but in an orderly manner.


They came out carring their shopping bags and their parcels,


some not properly wrapped and some not even paid for.


Most passers-by waited in the street to watch.Many of the


Shops and offices in the street had just been closed.Mr.Clement,


the officer in the charge of ordered all hoses


to are turned to the roof of the main building.People were pushed


back from the area of their own safety.Seven officers


entered the basement but were driven back within minutes.


Hurriedly they put on their masks,ready to try again.


 


When I walked into the teacher was handing


out the tests.I was feeling very nervous.I had not studied


at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be an easy test.


I went through the test  for(去掉)many times but I could only answer


three out of the twenty questions.I did not want to fail


the exam.Then,I put my book under my desk,opened it


and started looking for the answers.The teacher wasn`t


looking at me,so I copied something.Suddenly,I felt a hand


on my shoulder!The teacher caught me cheating.I didn't


know what to say.Luckily,the teacher did not punish me for


cheating but instead gave me a second chance.


 


At Chinese New Year,my family and I had a very busy


time.Two days before New Year`s Day,I went out with my


friends form school to a seafood restaurant in Pudong.


It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to,but the


food was delicious.After that,we went to(去掉)shopping for new


clothes and found lots of bargains.I visited my old teacher,


Mr.Smith.To my surprised,he said he didn`t find Chinese


New Year very exciting.He was not even wearing new clothes!


Because we have so(去掉) many tests this week,so I have to


Start studying hard again now.I wish the holiday were longer.

全部回答
  • 1楼网友:冷風如刀
  • 2021-08-18 08:51

什么考试还有改错  托福也没有了吧

  • 2楼网友:不想翻身的咸鱼
  • 2021-08-18 07:58

The alarm was first gone off(up) on the third floor.

People left the building hurriedly but in a(an) orderly manner.

They came out carry(carrying) their shopping bags and their parcels,

some (were) not properly wrapped and some not even paid.

Most passer(passers)-by waited in the street to watch.Many of the

Shops and offices in the street had just closed.Mr.Clement,

the officer in charge of(去掉) ordered all hoses

to turned(turn) to the roof of the main building.People were pushed

back(去掉) from the area of their own safety.Seven officers

entered the basement or(but) were driven back within minutes.

Hurriedly they put on their masks,ready to try again.

 

When I walked into(in) the teacher was handing

in(out) the tests.I was feeling very nervous.I had not studied

at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be (加an) easy test.

I went through the test for many times but I could only answer

three out from(of) the twenty questions.I did not want to fail

the exam.Then,I put my book under my desk,opening(opened) it

and started looking for the answer(answers).The teacher wasn`t

looking at me,but(so) I copied something.Suddenly,I felt a hand

on my shoulder!The teacher caught me cheating.I don`t(didn't)

know what to say.Luckily,the teacher did not punish (加me)for

cheating but instead (she) gave me a second chance.

 

At Chinese New Year,my family and I have(had) a very busy

time.Two days before New Year`s Day,I went out with my

friends form(from) school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.

It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to,and(but) the

food was delicious.After that,we went to( 去掉) shopping for new

clothes and found lots (加of) bargains.I visited my old teacher,

Mr.Smith.To my surprised(surprise),he said he didn`t find Chinese

New Year very excited(exciting).He was not even wearing new clothes!

Because we have so many tests this week,so( 去掉) I have to

Start studying hard again now.I wish the holiday were(was) long.

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