【glued】...ofsmartphonesmoreandmoreyoungpeopleinChinaaregluedtothem._...
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- 提问者网友：愿为果
- 2021-02-23 17:08
【glued】...ofsmartphonesmoreandmoreyoungpeopleinChinaaregluedtothem._...
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- 五星知识达人网友：酒醒三更
- 2021-02-23 18:24
【答案】
With the increasing popularity of smart phones more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However others consider it pointless believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.
分 析：
根据写作要求可知要考生为重庆划设了的中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道写一篇报道，报道人们对此的看法。句子的时态应该用一般现在时，只有在说明该道路已经修建的时候用一般过去式。根据要求必须用5句话，表示出要表达的那么多的信息量的句子，考生必须有扎实的语法知识的功底，能够正确使用复合句来表达所写的信息。
【亮点说明】短文用了短语，增加了文章的语言色彩，如with the increasing popularity of;are glued to;get addicted to等；文章用了分词做状语，表伴随，并使两种观点形成鲜明的对比，把那么多的信息放在了一个句子里来表达，可见写作功底；增加了文章的亮点。
考点：
考查议论文。
With the increasing popularity of smart phones more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However others consider it pointless believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.
分 析：
根据写作要求可知要考生为重庆划设了的中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道写一篇报道，报道人们对此的看法。句子的时态应该用一般现在时，只有在说明该道路已经修建的时候用一般过去式。根据要求必须用5句话，表示出要表达的那么多的信息量的句子，考生必须有扎实的语法知识的功底，能够正确使用复合句来表达所写的信息。
【亮点说明】短文用了短语，增加了文章的语言色彩，如with the increasing popularity of;are glued to;get addicted to等；文章用了分词做状语，表伴随，并使两种观点形成鲜明的对比，把那么多的信息放在了一个句子里来表达，可见写作功底；增加了文章的亮点。
考点：
考查议论文。
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- 2021-02-23 18:32
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