假设你叫Mark,你过了一个非常开心和健康的暑假,你去看望了你的外公外婆,和爸爸一起去爬山,常常帮助妈妈干家务,几乎没有上网打游戏,有时候和家人一起看电视,比如中国达人秀“China’s Got Talent”,你还经常和你的朋友锻炼身体......字数:(70词左右)。
参考词汇:visit,go to mountains, hardly ever, exercise...I am Li Hua. I had a very happy and healthy summer vacation. At the beginning of the vacation, I visited my grandparents who live in the countryside. I went to mountains with my father for several times. It helped me to be stronger and healthier. At home, I often helped mother do housework. I never played computer games. I spent time watching TV with my family. We all like the show “China’s Got Talent”, which is very popular in China. I also exercised with my friends sometimes.
假设你叫Mark,你过了一个非常开心和健康的暑假,你去看望了你的外公外婆,和爸爸一起去爬山,常常帮助妈妈干家务,几乎没有上网打游戏,有时候和家人一起看电视,比如中国达人秀“Chin
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- 提问者网友:欲劫无渡
- 2021-12-23 23:25
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- 五星知识达人网友:街头电车
- 2021-12-23 23:47
(答案→)I am Li Hua. I had a very happy and healthy summer vacation. At the beginning of the vacation, I visited my grandparents who live in the countryside. I went to mountains with my father for several times. It helped me to be stronger and healthier. At home, I often helped mother do housework. I never played computer games. I spent time watching TV with my family. We all like the show “China’s Got Talent”, which is very popular in China. I also exercised with my friends sometimes. 解析:这是篇给材料作文。材料中已经包括了写作的要点,在写作时不要遗漏。在陈述的时候注意句子的完整性和正确性,句子之间要逻辑清晰。写作时,注意要用第一人称,用一般过去式。所以尤其要注意动词的形式。【亮点分析】这篇文章紧扣材料,要点齐全,表述通顺流畅。文中用到了很多短语,例如:At the beginning of the vacation,在假期开始;go to mountains爬山;for several times几次;help sb. do sth.帮助某人做…..;等等。文章里也有些复杂的长句,例如:At the beginning of the vacation, I visited my grandparents who live in the countryside.在假期的开始,我去看忘了爷爷奶奶,他们住在乡下。Who引导了一个定语从句。We all like the show “China’s Got Talent”, which is very popular in China.我们都喜欢中国达人秀这个节目,它在中国很流行。Which引导了非限制性定语从句。
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- 1楼网友:一秋
- 2021-12-24 00:46
和我的回答一样,看来我也对了
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