假如你是某大学的学生会主席李华，最近，你市为方便市民，缓解交通压力即将开通一条新的公交路线。请根据下表的内容，写一个英语通知，告知在你校留学的外国学生。线路名称108路开通时间20

假如你是某大学的学生会主席李华，最近，你市为方便市民，缓解交通压力即将开通一条新的公交路线。请根据下表的内容，写一个英语通知，告知在你校留学的外国学生。
线路名称
108路
开通时间
2014年5月1日
运行时间
6:00am—11:00pm,每10分钟一班
运行区间
从火车站到市动物园
运行里程
全程15公里,共16个站点
运行票价
1元
注意事项
文明坐车
注意:1．词数100词左右;
2．适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
One possible version:
NOTICE
To relieve the increasing traffic pressure and make it convenient for us to go out, our city will open up a new bus route---No. 108 bus on May 1st,2014.
The No. 108 bus, which is a 10-minute bus, begins to operate at 6:00 am and closes at 11:00 pm. The first bus stop is the train station while the final bus stop is the city zoo. It covers a distance of 15 kilometers and there are 16 stops in total. However, the fare is only 1 yuan for the whole journey.
If you are to take this bus, you should mind your manners. Wish you enjoy your bus journey！
The Students’ Union
Sep. 28th,2013

(答案→)One possible version:NOTICE To relieve the increasing traffic pressure and make it convenient for us to go out, our city will open up a new bus route---No. 108 bus on May 1st,2014. The No. 108 bus, which is a 10-minute bus, begins to operate at 6:00 am and closes at 11:00 pm. The first bus stop is the train station while the final bus stop is the city zoo. It covers a distance of 15 kilometers and there are 16 stops in total. However, the fare is only 1 yuan for the whole journey. If you are to take this bus, you should mind your manners. Wish you enjoy your bus journey！ The Students’ UnionSep. 28th,2013 解析：本文是篇图表作文, 要求学生以学生会的名义，用英语写一篇通知。1. 注意书面通知的格式，2.告知学生新开通的公交路线。根据通知的要求和内容来看，要用一般将来时和一般现在时。字数要求100词左右。还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如open up，be to do，还运用了不定式作目的状语、宾语；非限制性定语从句，条件状语从句和感叹句等等。并注意了句子变化和句子之间的衔接如：However，while等。

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