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  • 提问者网友:聂風
  • 2021-06-05 10:38

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dear mike ,

are you feeling any better ?as you know it,our trip to peace city is originally planned for june 15th .however, it has been delayed until june 20th . be certain to arrive at the school gate before7;00 a.m. we'll first go on an hour guided tour of the tiger river, when will be followed by a visit to lion hill,starting at about 9:00 a.m. bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon. on the afternoon,we'll pay visit to the history museum at 3:00, for which we have to pay another$55. we plan to return at about 5:00p.m. don't forget wear sports shoes.

hope you join us in the coming trip

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  • 五星知识达人网友:逃夭
  • 2021-06-05 11:54

dear mike ,


are you feeling any better ?as you know it,our trip to peace city is originally planned for june 15th .however, it has been delayed until june 20th . be certain to arrive at the school gate before7;00 a.m. we'll first go on(to) an hour guided tour of the tiger river, when(then) will be followed by a visit to lion hill,starting(will start) at about 9:00 a.m. bring your lunch as(as well) we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon. on(in) the afternoon,we'll pay for visiting to the history museum at 3:00, for which we have to pay another $55. we will plan to return at about 5:00p.m. don't forget to wear sports shoes.


I hope you can join us in the coming trip

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